looks
학생이 쓴 원문
I;m happy but need a health.
I,m 45 years old, but my mind is 18 years old.
I heard look younger than age from another people.
I'm a tall and skinny.
But not good health.
And I will effort for health.
I want(hope) looks more healthy.
I will doing yoga and golf in 2014.
I must live more younger^^
강사 첨삭
Hi there Miss [이름]^^
Thank you for doing your homework^^
I had a great time reading it.
I made some corrections and I hope I was able to meet all your points.
If you have some questions, just feel free to ask me in our class.
Enjoy the rest of your day and take care^^
Teacher Mona
I;m happy but need a health.
I,m 45 years old, but my mind is 18 years old.
>>I\'m 45 years old but I think as an 18 years old.
OR do you mean>> I am 45 years old but I look like an 18 year old.
I heard look younger than age from another people.
>>I heard from other people that I look younger than my age.
I\'m a tall and skinny.
>> I\'m tall and skinny.
But not good health.
>>But I am not healthy.
And I will effort for health.
>>And I will exert effort to be healthy.
I want(hope) looks more healthy.
>>I want to look healthy.
I will doing yoga and golf in 2014.
>>I will do yoga and play golf this 2014.
I must live more younger^^
>>I must look younger.
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