Lose The Moon
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme : [ESSAY] What do you think is going to happen if Earth is going to lose the moon?
We can\'t see anything at night.
So we will have to use candles or smartphone flash at night.
And there won\'t be tides.
When Earth lose the Moon, It won\'t be so good! : ( ; (
강사 첨삭
Here\'s your corrected composition, [이름].
See you on Wednesday!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Theme : [ESSAY] What do you think is going to happen if Earth is going to lose the moon?
We can\'t see anything at night.
>> or: It would be almost pitch black at night.
So we will have to use candles or smartphone flash at night.
>> So we will have to use candles or smartphone lights at night.
And there won\'t be tides.
>> or: And there won\'t be any tides, such as high or low tides on Earth.
When Earth lose the Moon, It won\'t be so good! : ( ; (
>> When Earth loses the Moon, it would be terrible! : ( ; (
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