Lost
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
Thanks for accomplishing your homework. You got all the correct answers!
Anyway, the series you\'re watching seems to be interesting. I will try to look for that. See you on Friday!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
1) satisfired/
>>> Correct!
2) disgusted/
>>> Correct!
3) confusing/
>>> Correct!
4) amusing/
>>> Correct!
5) tiring/
>>> Correct!
6) interested/
>>> Correct!
7) worried/
>>> Correct!
8) confused/
>>> Correct!
9) boring/
>>> Correct!
10) scared/
>>> Correct!
Today, I want to write about an American drama,\"Lost\",because you didn\'t give any essay topic to me.
>>> Correct!
My husband and I often enjoy watching American dramas and we chose \"Lost\"this time as I had heard an Korean actress appeared this drama which made me interested.
>>> My husband and I often enjoy watching American dramas and we chose Lost this time because I heard a Korean actress appeared in this drama.
Yunjin Kim is a famous actress in Korea but I didn\'t know she grew up in America so she is good at English.
>>> Correct!
The story of Lost begins as some people suvived the air crash.
>>> OR: The drama begins with the aftermath of a plane crash.
They waited for rescue teams but several days later, thet realized no one could come there since the desert island had never been found by anyone.
>>> The survivors waited for rescue but several days later, they realized no one could come since they\'re on a deserted island.
However, strange thins happened constantly so they found out there were the others who had lived in the island for a long time before they came.
>>> Correct! [things]
The others treatened and kidnapped some of the newly arrived people.
>>> The others threatened and kidnapped some of the newly arrived people.
There was a long battle of wits between the two groups and I haven\'t finished watching the all series of Lost so I\'m not sure yet though, I guess the island has some mysterious secrets.
>>> There was a long battle of wits between the two groups and I\'m not yet done watching all the episodes so I am not sure about what happened next. I guess the island has some mysterious secrets.
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