Losting My Dream Lense
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The biggest mistake I made is I lost my dream lense. I was trying to add some water in my lense bowl, but one side of my lense go through into the sink. However, it is 400,000won for each side. So I pay for it again.
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Hi [이름]!
Oh, that\'s unfortunate. Maybe you were not able to control the water pressure.
The biggest mistake I made is I lost my dream lense.
>> The biggest mistake that I have made is when I lost my dream lenses.
I was trying to add some water in my lense bowl, but one side of my lense go through into the sink.
>> I was trying to add some water in my lenses container and one of it fell through the sink.
However, it is 400,000won for each side. So I pay for it again.
>> It is 400,00 won each so I need to buy one again.
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