LOTTERY
학생이 쓴 원문
If you won the lottery, what would you do?
I will buy a car,Lamborghini for my father. :)
I also save the leftover money in my bank.
Otherwise I will donate the leftover money for poor or sick people.
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I will buy a car,Lamborghini for my father. :)
I also save the leftover money in my bank.
Otherwise I will donate the leftover money for poor or sick people.
>> If I won the lottery, I will buy a Lamborghini car for my father. I will save the money that will be left in a bank. Otherwise I will donate the money that was left for the poor or sick people.
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