Lou
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Thank you! Ben and Hazel! You could pronounce it just like \'루\'. The name is from Nietszche\'s one-sided lover, Lou Salome ( you\'ve heard the name, 루 살로메) but she got married to his close friend. (Poor Nietzsche ㅠ). She was German but her father was French-Russian. That\'why her name, Lue gives off French vibe, I guess.
Lou was a writer and psychoanalyst. She interacted with and inspired the best intellects Europe of the time: Nietzsche, Rilke, Freud and so on. Wow!
While reading a book about Nietzsche written by Lou, I was inspired by her. And I talked to myself \"Okay, I made a decision. Change my name from now on! If you were born as a woman, you should live at least like this.\"
* I\'m too old to be some guys\' muse, though! Umhahaha
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Thank you! Ben and Hazel! You could pronounce it just like \'루\'.
>>> CORRECT
The name is from Nietzsche\'s one-sided lover, Lou Salome ( you\'ve heard the name, 루 살로메) but she got married to his close friend. (Poor Nietzsche ㅠ).
>>> CORRECT
She was German but her father was French-Russian.
>>> She is a German but her father is a French-Russian.
That\'why her name, Lue gives off French vibe, I guess.
>>> That\'s why her name, Lue gives off French vibe, I guess.
Lou was a writer and psychoanalyst.
Lou was a writer and psychoanalyst.
>>> Lou was a writer and a psychoanalyst.
She interacted with and inspired the best intellects Europe of the time: Nietzsche, Rilke, Freud and so on. Wow!
>>> She interacted and inspired with the best intellects Europe of the time: Nietzsche, Rilke, Freud and so on. Wow!
>>> She interacted and inspired with the best intellects Europe of the time: Nietzsche, Rilke, Freud and so on. Wow!
While reading a book about Nietzsche written by Lou, I was inspired by her.
>>> CORRECT
And I talked to myself \"Okay, I made a decision.
>>> And I told myself \"Okay, I made a decision.
Change my name from now on!
>>> I will change my name from now on!
If you were born as a woman, you should live at least like this.\"
>>> CORRECT
* I\'m too old to be some guys\' muse, though! Umhahaha
>>> CORRECT
* I\'m too old to be some guys\' muse, though! Umhahaha
>>> CORRECT
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