Louise~:)

Hi there! You are such an interesting person! I am pleased because you are putting into practice what you have learned in English. You composed great sentences in your composition. That effort deserves a high five!

T. Louise ^^

Please check my following sentense.
>>> Please check my following sentences.
Question - What do you think is the most important aspect of using a mobile phone ?

My own answer
>> My own answer:
I think the most important aspect of mobile phone is the variety of mobile service.
>>>Correct
The reason is that many mobile phone users are require various and new services.
>>> The reason is that many mobile phone users requires various and new services.
A moblie service used to me mainly is \'kakaotalk\' .

>>> A mobile service I used mainly is the \"KakaoTalk\".

This service is very convenient to comunicate with my friends everywhere.

>>> Correct just be careful with spelling the words correctly.
>>> This service is very convenient to communicate with my friends everywhere.
Also it\'s economical service because of complimentary.
>>> It is also an economical service because of the complimentary services.
In addition, I use my phone to check the weather.

>>> Correct

For this service I get real-time weather information.
>>> Correct
Specially, weather pre-view service is very informative rainy season because I can bring an umbrella.
>>> Specially, the weather preview service is very informative during rainy season because I know when will I bring an umbrella.
Thank you~ :)