Love
학생이 쓴 원문
I have sometimes hugged my wife and daughters tightly when I felt much delight full
about home affairs . .
A few years ago, my first daughter has entered the famous university in Seoul and
son also got new job that he hoped to obtain it. So I was much delighted them.
강사 첨삭
Hi Mr. [이름]!
Expression of emotions is really special.
Thank you for sharing this today.
It\'s a good way to start the week.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I have sometimes hugged my wife and daughters tightly when I felt much delight full about home affairs . .
>> I have sometimes hugged my wife and daughters tightly when I felt much delight about home affairs.
A few years ago, my first daughter has entered the famous university in Seoul and son also got new job that he hoped to obtain it.
A few years ago, my first daughter has entered the famous university in Seoul and son also got new job that he hoped to obtain it.
>> A few years ago, my first daughter had entered the famous university in Seoul and my son also got a new job that he had been hoping for.
So I was much delighted them.
>> That\'s why I was really delighted with them.
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