Love

2010-09-17 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

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Love is a kind of emotion which people have. So It makes people feel happy and sad. Few days ago, I thought about friendship and love, and concluded that love has more wide range which can feel variety feeling than friendship.When you might fall in love, you'll be happy, because of your love emotion,then,somedays you could feel sad.It means, love makes people change to other one. If our life is always same,there is no meaning to live, because our life will become very boring.Thus, love is one of facts to make our life more happier.

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Happy Thursday [이름]! What a wonderful Thursday isn't it?  I'm glad to know your opinion about love because this is very interesting for me.  See you later! Monica   Love is a kind of emotion which people have. >>>correct So It makes people feel happy and sad. >>>correct Few days ago, I thought about friendship and love, and concluded that love has more wide range which can feel variety feeling than friendship. >>>Few days ago, I thought about friendship and love, and concluded that love has wider range which can feel variety of feelings than friendship. When you might fall in love, you'll be happy, because of your love emotion,then,somedays you could feel sad. >>>When you fall in love, you feel happy  because of your love emotion, however, sometimes you experience the feeling of sadness. It means, love makes people change to other one. >>>>Love  can change people for the better or for the worse. If our life is always same,there is no meaning to live, because our life will become very boring. >>>Our lives will be very boring if we are living an ordinary life. Thus, love is one of facts to make our life more happier. >>>Love really makes our lives happier.

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