Love

2016-07-18 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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What is love? I think love is the greatest power that moves people. As the wind moving clouds, the love moving a people. It is many proverb about love. CoolNsmart.com saying Love starts with a hug, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear. The lyrics of Korea is saying "love is the seed of tears." I agree it entirely. Another saying is. God gave us everything in pairs-two hands, two eyes, two ears... But why only one heart? Because he gave another to someone else for us to go find. What a great saying that would be! Willian Shakespeare saying "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind." Because people have a mind." Although love ended in tears, find another the mind. And then you will have two mind.

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir,

Love quotes, love poems, love songs, there are so many things written about love since the beginning of time. It\'s a great inspiration but it could also bring great depression. Anyway, happy reading and writing sir. See you on Wednesday!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

 

What is love?

>>correct!

I think love is the greatest power that moves people.

>>correct!

As the wind moving clouds, the love moving a people.

>>As the wind moves the clouds, love moves people.

It is many proverb about love.

>>There are many proverbs about love.

CoolNsmart.com saying Love starts with a hug, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear.

>>There is a saying at Coolnsmart.com that says, \"Love starts with a hug, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear.\"

The lyrics of Korea is saying \"love is the seed of tears.\"

>>There is a Korean song which says in the lyrics, \" love is the seed of tears\".

I agree it entirely.

>>I agree to it entirely.

Another saying is, \"God gave us everything in pairs-two hands, two eyes, two ears... But why only one heart?

Because he gave another to someone else for us to go find\".

>>correct!

What a great saying that would be!

>>What a great saying that is!

Willian Shakespeare saying \"Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind.\" 

>>William Shakespeare said, \"Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind.\"

Because people have a mind.\"Although love ended in tears, find another the mind. And then you will have two mind.

>>Because people have a mind. Although love ended in tears, find another  mind. And then you will have two minds.

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