Love
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Hello Sir,
Love quotes, love poems, love songs, there are so many things written about love since the beginning of time. It\'s a great inspiration but it could also bring great depression. Anyway, happy reading and writing sir. See you on Wednesday!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
What is love?
>>correct!
I think love is the greatest power that moves people.
>>correct!
As the wind moving clouds, the love moving a people.
>>As the wind moves the clouds, love moves people.
It is many proverb about love.
>>There are many proverbs about love.
CoolNsmart.com saying Love starts with a hug, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear.
>>There is a saying at Coolnsmart.com that says, \"Love starts with a hug, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear.\"
The lyrics of Korea is saying \"love is the seed of tears.\"
>>There is a Korean song which says in the lyrics, \" love is the seed of tears\".
I agree it entirely.
>>I agree to it entirely.
Another saying is, \"God gave us everything in pairs-two hands, two eyes, two ears... But why only one heart?
Because he gave another to someone else for us to go find\".
>>correct!
What a great saying that would be!
>>What a great saying that is!
Willian Shakespeare saying \"Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind.\"
>>William Shakespeare said, \"Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind.\"
Because people have a mind.\"Although love ended in tears, find another the mind. And then you will have two mind.
>>Because people have a mind. Although love ended in tears, find another mind. And then you will have two minds.
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