Love cats&Hate dogs
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Theme: [ESSAY] Why do you think some people love cats and hate dogs?
I don\'t know deeply, because I like dogs and hate cats.
But I think they like the appearance.
Newborn cittens are cute, but the newborn puppies aren\'t.
And dogs lick, but cats dosen\'t.
And cats can be taken care easily.
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Jean~~
Theme: [ESSAY] Why do you think some people love cats and hate dogs?
I don\'t know deeply, because I like dogs and hate cats.
But I think they like the appearance.
>> I\'m not quite sure because I like dogs and hate cats, but I think some people prefer the appearance of dogs.
Newborn cittens are cute, but the newborn puppies aren\'t.
And dogs lick, but cats dosen\'t.
>> Newborn kittens are cute, but the newborn puppies aren\'t and dogs lick, but cats don\'t.
And cats can be taken care easily.
>> And cats can be taken care of easily.
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