love is...

2017-08-21 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

love is sweet. love is irritating at me. love is a kind of emotional feeling. love is eternal. love is like a smooth sweet bread. thanks for reading. and the recording file was cutted in playing.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Mr. [이름]!

Thanks for your composition! Indeed, love has various definitions. It all depends on the person who experienced and felt it.^^ Regarding the recording of the class, I checked it and it was complete. Please check it again.^^

T. JanE ^^

Love is sweet.

>> Correct

Love is irritating at me.

>> Love is irritating. 

Love is a kind of emotional feeling.

>> Correct

Love is eternal.

>> Correct

Love is like a smooth sweet bread.

>> Correct

Thanks for reading.

>> Correct

And the recording file was cutted in playing.

>> By the way, the recording file was cut while playing. 

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