love.. what is it for me
학생이 쓴 원문
Love is so complicate meaning for everybody.
And it's difficult to define it.
So, today I want to focus on love that between man and woman.
There are two sides to love all the times.
it seees like when you fall in love you could desired something from your lover at the same time you want to give your lover something.
Love can make people happy and sad.
The more you love, the more you feel anxiety.
In conclusion, LOVE is difficult word to define.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
I LOOOOOVE this composition! I agree that the word \'love\' is difficult to define.
Sometimes it makes you happy, sometimes it makes you sad.
Like you said, \"The more you love, the more anxiety you feel.\" (This made me laugh, actually. Hahaha!)
Well I guess, LOVE gives one a headache sometimes. Haha!
See you later, [이름]!
~Teacher Alice
Love is so complicate meaning for everybody.>> Love has a very complicated meaning for everybody.And it\'s difficult to define it.>> Correct!So, today I want to focus on love that between man and woman.>> So today, I want to focus on love between man and woman.There are two sides to love all the times.>> There are two sides to love all the time.it seees like when you fall in love you could desired something from your lover at the same time you want to give your lover something.
>> It seems like when you fall in love, you could desire something from your lover at the same time, you want to give your lover something.Love can make people happy and sad.>> Correct!The more you love, the more you feel anxiety.>> Correct! *Ahahaha! Why do you say so?
>> OR: The more you love, the more anxiety you feel.In conclusion, LOVE is difficult word to define.
>> In conclusion, LOVE is a difficult word to define.
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