Love yourself♡
학생이 쓴 원문
I want told my self young Ann, just love your self.
Actually, I can\'t do it perfectly until now.
When I was a trainee, I don\'t know how to love my self.
Just everyday I known like it\' my fault.
When I can\'t loose my weight, and I turned all the small problems into my fault.
It\'s feels like I was very small person and that would be make my self bad habit like bite nail.
If I can told my self young Ann.
It\'s everything okay just love your self.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ann:)
Yes, that is true. We should love ourselves but everyone undergoes a time where they feel insecure. It is part of our lives and eventually, we get through it. :)
Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.
I want told my self young Ann, just love your self.
>> I want to tell my young self to love your self.
Actually, I can\'t do it perfectly until now.
>> CORRECT
When I was a trainee, I don\'t know how to love my self.
>> CORRECT
Just everyday I known like it\' my fault.
>> I just feel like everything is my fault all the time.
When I can\'t loose my weight, and I turned all the small problems into my fault.
>> When I can\'t loose my weight, I blamed my self all the time even for the small problems.
It\'s feels like I was very small person and that would be make my self bad habit like bite nail.
>> It felt like I was a very small person and it would make me feel bad about myself which causes me to bit my nails.
If I can told my self young Ann.
>> If I can turn back time to tell something to my old self, it would be to love yourself.
It\'s everything okay just love your self.
>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.
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