Love yourself first for you and a person you love

2020-02-03 · 첨삭 강사 Eve

학생이 쓴 원문

It is necessary for everyone to fill up their self-esteem. If you love yourself truly, it means you have high self-esteem. I read the comment someone wrote after she broke up. \"Even though I loved him so much, I couldn\'t have a romance with him for a long time. Because I didn\'t love myself so much.\" She said she couldn\'t pour love into her boyfriend because she didn\'t fill herself up first. Many people clicked \'like\' of her comment, and showed their sympathy. She was right. If you don\'t like yourself, you doubt others and yourself. They don\'t like me because I\'m not pretty, smart, or rich……. In conclusion, you can\'t give love to others. Love myself. This is a name of BTS\'s song. I\'m not a fan of BTS, but I really love this song. Many idols sing a song about \'I love you,\' but this song tells us \'love yourself.\' If you want to love others truly, don\'t forget to love yourself first.

강사 첨삭

HAPPY MONDAY!

Thank you so much for being expressive on this essay.

Great composition, as always.

I definitely agree with your point.

~Teacher Eve.

It is necessary for everyone to fill up their self-esteem.

>> Correct!

If you love yourself truly, it means you have high self-esteem.

>> If you love yourself truly, it means you have a high self-esteem.

I read the comment someone wrote after she broke up.

>> I read a comment that someone wrote after she broke up with her boyfriend.
 \"Even though I loved him so much, I couldn\'t have a romance with him for a long time. Because I didn\'t love myself so much.\"

>>  \"Even though I loved him so much, I couldn\'t be romantic with him for a long time. Because I didn\'t love myself so much.\"
 She said she couldn\'t pour love into her boyfriend because she didn\'t fill herself up first.

>> Correct!

Many people clicked \'like\' of her comment, and showed their sympathy.

>> Many people clicked \'like\' on her comment, and showed their sympathy.
 She was right.

>> Correct!

If you don\'t like yourself, you doubt others and yourself.

>> If you don\'t like yourself, you will doubt others and yourself.

They don\'t like me because I\'m not pretty, smart, or rich…….

>> Correct!

In conclusion, you can\'t give love to others.

>> Correct!
 Love myself.

>> Correct!

This is a name of BTS\'s song.

>> Correct!

I\'m not a fan of BTS, but I really love this song.

>> Correct!

Many idols sing a song about \'I love you,\' but this song tells us \'love yourself.\'

>> Many idols sing a song about \'I love you,\' but this song tells us to \'love yourself.\'

If you want to love others truly, don\'t forget to love yourself first.

>> Correct!

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