Love yourself first for you and a person you love
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HAPPY MONDAY!
Thank you so much for being expressive on this essay.
Great composition, as always.
I definitely agree with your point.
~Teacher Eve.
It is necessary for everyone to fill up their self-esteem.
>> Correct!
If you love yourself truly, it means you have high self-esteem.
>> If you love yourself truly, it means you have a high self-esteem.
I read the comment someone wrote after she broke up.
>> I read a comment that someone wrote after she broke up with her boyfriend.
\"Even though I loved him so much, I couldn\'t have a romance with him for a long time. Because I didn\'t love myself so much.\"
>> \"Even though I loved him so much, I couldn\'t be romantic with him for a long time. Because I didn\'t love myself so much.\"
She said she couldn\'t pour love into her boyfriend because she didn\'t fill herself up first.
>> Correct!
Many people clicked \'like\' of her comment, and showed their sympathy.
>> Many people clicked \'like\' on her comment, and showed their sympathy.
She was right.
>> Correct!
If you don\'t like yourself, you doubt others and yourself.
>> If you don\'t like yourself, you will doubt others and yourself.
They don\'t like me because I\'m not pretty, smart, or rich…….
>> Correct!
In conclusion, you can\'t give love to others.
>> Correct!
Love myself.
>> Correct!
This is a name of BTS\'s song.
>> Correct!
I\'m not a fan of BTS, but I really love this song.
>> Correct!
Many idols sing a song about \'I love you,\' but this song tells us \'love yourself.\'
>> Many idols sing a song about \'I love you,\' but this song tells us to \'love yourself.\'
If you want to love others truly, don\'t forget to love yourself first.
>> Correct!
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