Lovely abby~~
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi
Lovely abby~~
4. I don't know what design is fit for me
>>> I didn't know what design fits me
I'd like to revise that sentence.
>>> I want to wear wedding dress not the most beautiful dress but the most matchable dress. ^^
I always thanks for you.
I order vocabulary book on internet.
I will study vocabulary and grammer. ^^
bye~~
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
You’re so verbose in our class, though you are hard up of doing so, I can see your best. Anyhow, that doesn’t end there. Have more studies regarding verb tenses and of course the word choices as well as the sentence pattern. Be mindful of always of saying complete thoughts to fully understand what you mean. Over all, I can see you’re improving. Keep studying! Do well on practices. “_)
ABBY
HiLovely abby~~
>> Hi Lovely Abby!
I'd like to revise that sentence.
>> I’d like you to revise this sentence:
I want to wear wedding dress not the most beautiful dress but the most matchable dress. ^^
>> I want to wear a wedding dress which is not the most beautiful but fits me the most.
>> I want to wear a wedding dress which is not the most beautiful but is most suitable for me.
I always thanks for you.
>> I always thank you for the help. (WRITE A COMPLETE THOUGHT ALWAYS)I order vocabulary book on internet.>> I ordered a dictionary online.
>> I ordered an electronic dictionary online.I will study vocabulary and grammer. ^^
>> So I will study vocabularies and grammar further.
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