Lovely Pet

2012-02-27 · 첨삭 강사 Janette

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Favorite Pet. But when i was a in country, I had a dog 4. Now we grow up in the city, I had a cat 1. Cat is quiet but, dadn't had a cute movement, however cat is chic. SO, Answer is um medium of them Catdog.%^^%

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Hi my dear [이름]! .^__^.   Happy Monday!^^ I am so happy to open my page with your composition in it. I am always thankful for your diligence to do your homeworks and to study in our class very well. You are so amazing.^^   Anyway, you are doing great in your sentences. You are now giving me more than two sentences. Your ideas are increasing, and that is so nice to see everyday. Kindly read your corrections and keep it in mind so that next time you can use the correct words and order again next time..kkkk Have a wonderful study time.   Take care and see you in class later~ T. Janette   But when i was a in country, I had a dog 4. >>When I was in the countryside, I had 4 dogs.Now we grow up in the city, I had a cat 1. >>Now that we\'re in the city, I have one cat.Cat is quiet but, dadn\'t had a cute movement, however cat is chic. >>My cat is quiet and doesn\'t have a cute movement, however the cat is a chic.SO,Answer is um medium of them Catdog.%^^% >>CORRECT

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