low-paying jobs

2021-11-10 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

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Usually Korean cinsider as low-paying jobs are delivery service, non-regular worker, janitor, cleaning service, drivers, small store owner and construction worker and so on. Recently it was happen a big crime about real estate crime in my counter that related to white colors as lawyers, accountants, upper class pblic servantcs and politicians. I think that we should be stricter in punishing them. But the government and the presedient are tolerant to them. So I am so upset.

강사 첨삭

Good day, Ms. [이름]. I think every country has the same perception with the jobs that you mentioned. It would now depend n the person on how we treat them.

Aki :)

Usually Korean cinsider as low-paying jobs are delivery service, non-regular worker, janitor, cleaning service, drivers, small store owner and construction worker and so on.

>>> Usually, Koreans consider delivery service, non-regular worker, janitor, cleaning service, drivers, small store owner and construction worker and so on as low-paying jobs.
Recently it was happen a big crime about real estate crime in my counter that related to white colors as lawyers, accountants, upper class pblic servantcs and politicians.
>>> Recently, a big crime happened in real estate that involves white collar job workers like lawyers, accountants, upper class public assistants and politicians.
I think that we should be stricter in punishing them.

>>> CORRECT!

OR >>> I think the law must comply in punishing them.
But the government and the presedient are tolerant to them.

>>> But the government and the president are tolerant to them.

So I am so upset.

>>> CORRECT!

OR >>> That made me upset.

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