Low self esteem

2025-10-22 · 첨삭 강사 Jenna

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Hmm. . I try to remind good sentences like \"You are doing well enoughly. It\'s OK. Slowing steps are OK. Keep going. Don\'t be down. \" But I try to hike or ride a bicycle if my feeling doesn\'t recover even though the efforts like this. However, it is hard to recover my thoughts and mind because there is no place to hike and ride a bicycle in Chennai . So I miss my Korea.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Ms. [Name]! I really understand how you feel. It’s wonderful that you try to encourage yourself with positive words. That shows great self-awareness and strength. I can imagine it’s difficult not having your favorite places to hike or ride in Chennai. It’s natural to miss home, especially the peaceful spots you’re used to. Still, it’s amazing that you’re finding ways to care for yourself and stay motivated. You’re doing great; keep being kind to yourself.

~T. Jenna

I try to remind good sentences like \"You are doing well enoughly.

It\'s OK. Slowing steps are OK. Keep going. Don\'t be down. \"

>>I try to remind myself of good or encouraging sentences like, “You’re doing well enough. It’s OK. Slow steps are OK. Keep going. Don’t feel down.”
But I try to hike or ride a bicycle if my feeling doesn\'t recover even though the efforts like this.

>>But I try to hike or ride a bicycle if my feeling doesn’t recover even though I make efforts like this.

>>But I try to go hiking or ride a bicycle if I don’t feel better, even after trying things like this.
However, it is hard to recover my thoughts and mind because there is no place to hike and ride a bicycle in Chennai . So I miss my Korea.

>>However, it’s hard to clear my mind because there’s no place to go hiking or cycling in Chennai. I really miss Korea.

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