Loyal
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
It\'s good to hear that you enjoyed playing.
I hope you also enjoy studying. kkk
Anyway congratulations for winning 8 games!
See you!
_Teacher Dianne ^^
Teacher,I started Loyal game today.And it was really fun I enjoyed it.
>> Teacher, I started playing Royale game and it was really fun so I enjoyed it.
I like Special Soldier too.Loyal game is really interesting.
>> Royale game is really interesting and I like Special Soldier too.
I enjoyed that game.And I won 8games.
>> I enjoyed that game and I won 8 games.
And I thought I am a great general.See you later.Bye,bye.
>> I thought that I\'m a great general now. See you later! Goodbye!
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