lt's so really long time no see.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, Elice. As the today's title above, It took a pretty long time to see you again. Oh! how have you been? How are you ? Even three days ago, we were in 2012.
Anyhow, I really hope we will keep our class fatastic and I will answer to your any questions attentively forward. Actually, today I got a breaktime freely. I started to check the necessary things such as WISC, ISIC and student insurance ( It can be used as student card from the forien country) using computer from early morning. It still has been processed until not but it nearly finished. I thought this was nothing at first. However, i took a lot of time and I started to feel tired. It took already about more than 6 hours ( It's time used is nearly same with your time that was used in traveling last year on a basis of your words). Umm, On a second thought, I don't think I have so much time to prepare my plan. As time goes, it makes me exciting, nervous and throubbing at the same time.
I would waiting for your call tonight.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Happy 2013!
Indeed, it has been a long time no talk! I had an awesome new year celebration with my family.
How about you?
How did you celebrate your new year\'s day?
Well I think you had a heavy day today accomplishing all those things.
I will call you later, [이름]!^^
~ Teacher Alice
Hi, Elice.
>> Hi Alice. *I think Elice is a pretty name though, hahaha.
As the today\'s title above, It took a pretty long time to see you again.
>> As today\'s title above, it took a pretty long time to see you again.
Oh! how have you been?
>> Oh! How have you been? *Happy! :)
How are you ?
>> Correct!
Even three days ago, we were in 2012.
>> Correct!Anyhow, I really hope we will keep our class fatastic and I will answer to your any questions attentively forward.
>> Anyhow, I really hope we will keep our class fantastic and I will answer any of your questions attentively forward.
Actually, today I got a breaktime freely.
>> Correct!
I started to check the necessary things such as WISC, ISIC and student insurance ( It can be used as student card from the forien country) using computer from early morning.
>> I started to check the necessary things such as WISC, ISIC and student insurance ( It can be used as student card from the foreign country.) using the computer from early morning.
It still has been processed until not but it nearly finished.
>> It still on process until now but it is nearly finished.
I thought this was nothing at first.
>> Correct!
However, i took a lot of time and I started to feel tired. >> However, I took a lot of time and I started to feel tired.
It took already about more than 6 hours ( It\'s time used is nearly same with your time that was used in traveling last year on a basis of your words).
>> It took already about more than 6 hours ( Its time used is nearly same with your time that was used in traveling last year on a basis of your words).
Umm, On a second thought, I don\'t think I have so much time to prepare my plan.
>> Umm, on a second thought, I don\'t think I have so much time to prepare my plan.
As time goes, it makes me exciting, nervous and throubbing at the same time.>> As time goes, it makes me exciting, nervous and throbbing at the same time.I would waiting for your call tonight.
>> I will be waiting for your call tonight.
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