Luck has nothing to do with success
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\"When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success.\" Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
I can\'t agree 100% beause as fsr as I know some case of sucess from luck.
>> I can\'t agree 100% because in some cases, success comes from luck.
Sometimes we can see that someone who do hard work a lot but they never reach success.
>> Sometimes, we can see that there are people who work so hard but they never reach success.
or
>>> Sometimes, we see people who work so hard but they never succeed.
Anyway mostly when people succeed, it is because of hard work.
>> Correct
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