Lucky

2016-11-22 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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I saw the movie Lucky with my family.It was really fun.And I enjoyed it.It is about the rich guy and begger was changed.There is a lot of funny story.After watching movie,I have a nice lunch with my family and grandma.I ate a lot.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!   It\'s an interesting movie from the way you told the story. ^^ I also had fun hearing it from you. It\'s nice to know that you enjoyed with your family. I hope I can also watch it. ^_^ See you on Thursday!   _Teacher Dianne   I saw the movie Lucky with my family. >> Correct >> Or: I watched the movie Lucky with my family. It was really fun.And I enjoyed it. >> It was really fun and I enjoyed it. It is about the rich guy and begger was changed. >> It is about a rich guy and a beggar who changed their status in life.  There is a lot of funny story. >> There are a lot of funny stories. After watching movie,I have a nice lunch with my family and grandma.I ate a lot. >> After watching the movie, I had a nice lunch with my family and grandmother. I ate a lot.

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