Lucky
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I saw the movie Lucky with my family.It was really fun.And I enjoyed it.It is about the rich guy and begger was changed.There is a lot of funny story.After watching movie,I have a nice lunch with my family and grandma.I ate a lot.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
It\'s an interesting movie from the way you told the story. ^^
I also had fun hearing it from you.
It\'s nice to know that you enjoyed with your family.
I hope I can also watch it. ^_^
See you on Thursday!
_Teacher Dianne
I saw the movie Lucky with my family.
>> Correct
>> Or: I watched the movie Lucky with my family.
It was really fun.And I enjoyed it.
>> It was really fun and I enjoyed it.
It is about the rich guy and begger was changed.
>> It is about a rich guy and a beggar who changed their status in life.
There is a lot of funny story.
>> There are a lot of funny stories.
After watching movie,I have a nice lunch with my family and grandma.I ate a lot.
>> After watching the movie, I had a nice lunch with my family and grandmother. I ate a lot.
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