Lucky

2019-06-19 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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I said \'life\', not \'wife\'. My pronunciation was terrible. Now that I think about it, it wasn\'t the right word. Let\'s get started. Movie \'Lucky\' begins with a man, name is Hyung-wook, hurting his head in a public bath. And other man, name is Jae-sung, watches Hyung-wook hurting in there. Jae-sung wanted to kill himself after shower, because he is a poor guy and a jobless. But after Hyung-wook was taken to the hospital, he realizes that their wallets were changed in there. There are a lot of money in his wallet. So he plan to use Hyung-wook\'s money, before suicide. Hyung-wook\'s job is a killer. On the other hand, Hyung-wook wakes up in the hospital with no memory. He tries to regain his memory through his wallet. Then the story goes on. P.S) I don\'t know whether I should use past word or present one when I explain a movie.

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~Teacher Lucy


I said \'life\', not \'wife\'.

>>CORRECT!

>>I mentioned life not wife.


My pronunciation was terrible.

>>CORRECT!

>>I mistakenly enunciate the word.


Now that I think about it, it wasn\'t the right word.

>>CORRECT!

>>I thought of it recently and it wasn\'t the right word.


Let\'s get started.

>>CORRECT!

>>So, the story goes this way.


Movie \'Lucky\' begins with a man, name is Hyung-wook, hurting his head in a public bath.

>>The movie \'Lucky\' begins with a man, named Hyung-wook, hurting his head in a public bath.


And other man, name is Jae-sung, watches Hyung-wook hurting in there.

>>And another man, named Jae-sung, watches Hyung-wook hurting.


Jae-sung wanted to kill himself after shower, because he is a poor guy and a jobless.

>>Jae-sung wanted to kill himself after taking a shower, because he is a poor guy and jobless.


But after Hyung-wook was taken to the hospital, he realizes that their wallets were changed in there.

>>But after Hyung-wook was taken to the hospital, he realizes that their wallets were interchanged.


There are a lot of money in his wallet.

>>CORRECT!

>>There are bunches of money in his wallet.


So he plan to use Hyung-wook\'s money, before suicide.

>>So, he plans to use Hyung-wook\'s money before attempting to suicide.


Hyung-wook\'s job is a killer.

>>CORRECT!

>>He plans fake deaths.


On the other hand, Hyung-wook wakes up in the hospital with no memory.

>>CORRECT!

>>Furthermore, Hyung-wook wakes up in the hospital amnesic.


He tries to regain his memory through his wallet.

>>CORRECT!

>>He tries to recall his memory through his wallet.


Then the story goes on.

>>CORRECT!

>>Then, the rest is history.

 P.S) I don\'t know whether I should use past word or present one when I explain a movie.

>>In explaining a movie, you can use past tenses. However, to maintain the freshness of the story, you can use present tenses. :)


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