Lucky
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~Teacher Lucy
I said \'life\', not \'wife\'.
>>CORRECT!
>>I mentioned life not wife.
My pronunciation was terrible.
>>CORRECT!
>>I mistakenly enunciate the word.
Now that I think about it, it wasn\'t the right word.
>>CORRECT!
>>I thought of it recently and it wasn\'t the right word.
Let\'s get started.
>>CORRECT!
>>So, the story goes this way.
Movie \'Lucky\' begins with a man, name is Hyung-wook, hurting his head in a public bath.
>>The movie \'Lucky\' begins with a man, named Hyung-wook, hurting his head in a public bath.
And other man, name is Jae-sung, watches Hyung-wook hurting in there.
>>And another man, named Jae-sung, watches Hyung-wook hurting.
Jae-sung wanted to kill himself after shower, because he is a poor guy and a jobless.
>>Jae-sung wanted to kill himself after taking a shower, because he is a poor guy and jobless.
But after Hyung-wook was taken to the hospital, he realizes that their wallets were changed in there.
>>But after Hyung-wook was taken to the hospital, he realizes that their wallets were interchanged.
There are a lot of money in his wallet.
>>CORRECT!
>>There are bunches of money in his wallet.
So he plan to use Hyung-wook\'s money, before suicide.
>>So, he plans to use Hyung-wook\'s money before attempting to suicide.
Hyung-wook\'s job is a killer.
>>CORRECT!
>>He plans fake deaths.
On the other hand, Hyung-wook wakes up in the hospital with no memory.
>>CORRECT!
>>Furthermore, Hyung-wook wakes up in the hospital amnesic.
He tries to regain his memory through his wallet.
>>CORRECT!
>>He tries to recall his memory through his wallet.
Then the story goes on.
>>CORRECT!
>>Then, the rest is history.
P.S) I don\'t know whether I should use past word or present one when I explain a movie.
>>In explaining a movie, you can use past tenses. However, to maintain the freshness of the story, you can use present tenses. :)
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