Lunar eclipse is~
학생이 쓴 원문
A lunar eclipse refers to a phenomenon in which the moon lies between the sun and the earth, and the moon covers all or part of the sun when viewed from the earth. (This is in the Naver dectionary). Because it covers it, the sun that was shining to our eyes and appear dark for a moment and then brighten again. The lunar eclipse apear just once every few years, so on that day, the whole people go to a place where we can see more good view the sun, and watch the lunar eclipse, also the news only talks about the lunar eclipse. Sometimes I think this way. The thought of how thrilled an astronaut in space would be at the moment of the lunar eclipse.
P.S. The picture is in Naver Blog.
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Hi Maria!
It is absolutely delightful to witness an eclipse may it be a lunar or solar eclipse as it only comes once in a blue moon. I hope that you can see one in your lifetime.
Thanks for this very informative composition!
See you in class!
-T. Donna =)
A lunar eclipse refers to a phenomenon in which the moon lies between the sun and the earth, and the moon covers all or part of the sun when viewed from the earth. (This is in the Naver dectionary).
>> Correct!
Or: dictionary (SPELLING)
Because it covers it, the sun that was shining to our eyes and appear dark for a moment and then brighten again.
>> Because it covers it, the sun that was shining that appear to our eyes becomes dark for a moment and then brightens again.
The lunar eclipse apear just once every few years, so on that day, the whole people go to a place where we can see more good view the sun, and watch the lunar eclipse, also the news only talks about the lunar eclipse.
>> The lunar eclipse appear just once every a few years, so on that day, people go to a place where they can see a good view of the sun, and watch the lunar eclipse, also, the news talks about the lunar eclipse.
Sometimes I think this way. The thought of how thrilled an astronaut in space would be at the moment of the lunar eclipse.
>> Sometimes I think about the thought of how thrilled an astronaut in space would be at the moment of the lunar eclipse.
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