Lunar New Year's Day

2011-02-01 · 첨삭 강사 RJ

학생이 쓴 원문

Now, te Lunar New Years is coming I'm going to have so much fun going to my cousins and my grandmother's house. I wonder how my little cousin sister is big or to walk. I'm very curious

강사 첨삭

Hi Joey,

Happy Lunar New Year's Day! I hope you and your family have a good one. Any plans? Let's talk about it later.

-RJ

Now, te Lunar New Years is coming
>>Now, the Lunar New Years is coming
I'm going to have so much fun going to my cousins and my grandmother's house.

>>correct

I wonder how my little cousin sister is big or to walk. I'm very curious

>>I wonder if my little cousin is big or able to walk. I'm very curious.

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