lunar new year's day
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
I am very much sure that you en[이름]ed your holidays.
So, just stay happy.
Anyway, I am going to call you again tomorrow.
En[이름] the rest of your afternoon.
~Teacher Chloe
Good afternoon teacher.
>>Good afternoon, teacher.
Today I will tell you about my lunar new year\'s day story.
>>Today, I am going to tell you about my Lunar New Year story.
0n lunar new year\'s day I went to my grand parents house.
>>I was at my grandparents\' house during the Lunar New Year.
And I ate delicious food. and I bow to my grand parents.
>>I bowed to my grandparents and ate delicious food.
My grant parents gave me the money.
>>They gave me some money.
I was happy.
>>Correct!
And I watched a television and I play a game it was very fun and exciting.
>>I watched television and played games. It was very fun and exciting.
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