Lunar New Years day is just arou.nd the corner

2013-02-07 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

As the title, the holidays is coming. I'll take a break from tomorrow, I am so excited to be off. I am going to take the train to visit my husband's hometown first. After that, I'll go to my parents house to have meal all toghther. I miss my family a lot. Before gettion on the train, I need to get to the station by car I am worried about the traffic jam. In the lunar new years days, there is heavy traffic jam in Korea. It's horrible but I like the holidays. Anyhow,it's too late now so I need to go to bed to get up early tomorrow morning.

강사 첨삭

Hi MARIA^^ Thank you for sending me a composition. I am really happy to receive one. I enjoyed reading it. You were able to express your ideas well.Good job!I\'m sorry to hear that during Seollal there is heavy traffic. A lot of people will be travelling to go to their hometown. I hope that you will have a wonderful time during the holiday. See you tomorrow! Take Care! Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: As the title, the holidays is coming. >> As the title goes,the holiday is fast approaching.I\'ll take a break from tomorrow, I am so excited to be off. >> I\'ll take a break starting tomorrow and I am excited to take a vacation.I am going to take the train to visit my husband\'s hometown first. >> Correct! OR >> First,I\'m going to take the subway to my husband\'s hometown.After that, I\'ll go to my parents house to have meal all toghther. >> After that,I\'ll go to my parents house to have a meal together.I miss my family a lot. >> Correct!Before gettion on the train, I need to get to the station by car >> Before getting to the train station,I need to travel by car.I am worried about the traffic jam. In the lunar new years days, there is heavy traffic jam in Korea. >> During Lunar New Years Day,I am worried about the traffic jam because there are a lot of cars on the streets. It\'s horrible but I like the holidays. >> It\'s horrible but I like holidays.Anyhow,it\'s too late now so I need to go to bed to get up early tomorrow morning. >> Correct OR >> Anyway,It\'s too late now so I need to go to bed to wake up early tomorrow morning.

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