Lunar New Years day is just arou.nd the corner
학생이 쓴 원문
As the title, the holidays is coming.
I'll take a break from tomorrow, I am so excited to be off.
I am going to take the train to visit my husband's hometown first.
After that, I'll go to my parents house to have meal all toghther.
I miss my family a lot.
Before gettion on the train, I need to get to the station by car
I am worried about the traffic jam. In the lunar new years days, there is heavy traffic jam in Korea. It's horrible but I like the holidays.
Anyhow,it's too late now so I need to go to bed to get up early tomorrow morning.
강사 첨삭
Hi MARIA^^
Thank you for sending me a composition. I am really happy to receive one. I enjoyed reading it. You were able to express your ideas well.Good job!I\'m sorry to hear that during Seollal there is heavy traffic. A lot of people will be travelling to go to their hometown. I hope that you will have a wonderful time during the holiday. See you tomorrow! Take Care!
Teacher Nina
Here are my corrections for you:
As the title, the holidays is coming.
>> As the title goes,the holiday is fast approaching.I\'ll take a break from tomorrow, I am so excited to be off.
>> I\'ll take a break starting tomorrow and I am excited to take a vacation.I am going to take the train to visit my husband\'s hometown first.
>> Correct!
OR >> First,I\'m going to take the subway to my husband\'s hometown.After that, I\'ll go to my parents house to have meal all toghther.
>> After that,I\'ll go to my parents house to have a meal together.I miss my family a lot.
>> Correct!Before gettion on the train, I need to get to the station by car
>> Before getting to the train station,I need to travel by car.I am worried about the traffic jam. In the lunar new years days, there is heavy traffic jam in Korea.
>> During Lunar New Years Day,I am worried about the traffic jam because there are a lot of cars on the streets.
It\'s horrible but I like the holidays.
>> It\'s horrible but I like holidays.Anyhow,it\'s too late now so I need to go to bed to get up early tomorrow morning.
>> Correct
OR >> Anyway,It\'s too late now so I need to go to bed to wake up early tomorrow morning.
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