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Balance is the most important words. Even love couldn't be beautiful, Unless people can't control one's feelings. I don't know specifically, there are many desires in ourselves. One of desires is to have something. When we found something shiny, desire to have is generated. Iike this, When we found someone who is talented for something, We want to have him/her and to know him/her. Yes it is good for him/her when we can maintain balance. Unless, We think it is love but it's not. Desire to have is becoming a crime when it goes to extreme way. It can be turned to jealous and furious which can harm our "own star". Too much is worse than too less.

[이름] ^^ Thank you again for sending this in. ^^ You did a good job. Please elaborate your ideas about this essay in class. I am really happy that you are doing your best to express yourself in writing, If you have any questions, feel free to ask me in class. Teacher Nina   Balance is the most important words. >> Balance is the most important word.Even love couldn\'t be beautiful, Unless people can\'t control one\'s feelings. >> Correct!I don\'t know specifically, there are many desires in ourselves. >> Did you mean: I don\'t know specifically but we do have a lot of desires. One of desires is to have something. >> One of the desire of people is to have something.When we found something shiny, desire to have is generated. >> When we found something shiny, the desire needs to be generated. Iike this, When we found someone who is talented for something, >> For example, when we found someone who is talented. We want to have him/her and to know him/her. >> Correct! >> OR: We want to know him/ her better. Yes it is good for him/her when we can maintain balance. >> Correct!Unless, We think it is love but it\'s not. >> Correct!Desire to have is becoming a crime when it goes to extreme way. >> Did you mean: Having a desire becomes a crime when it goes in an extreme way.>> OR: A desire becomes a crime when it becomes worse in some instances. >> OR: A desire becomes a crime when a person needed it the most.It can be turned to jealous and furious which can harm our \"own star\". >> It can turn out to be jelous and furious which can harm our \"own star\". Too much is worse than too less. >> Correct!