lunch.
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Dear lei.
Did you have a lunch? I forgot to ask it during our conversation.^ ^
My lunch time is from 12 to 1pm. I usually have a lunch at noon with my coworker. we are usually the first team who reach at the cateen in our company.^ ^ and I usully finish having lunch around 12:25. today our cateen's menu was not good.ㅠ ㅠ how about you?
Do you know my position? I couldn't remember if i told you about it while we met when jenny went to USA. I have two position. the major position
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Dear lei.
Did you have a lunch? I forgot to ask it during our conversation.^ ^
>>Did you have lunch already? I forgot to ask you during our class.
My lunch time is from 12 to 1pm.
>>correct
>>My lunch break is from 12 to 1pm. - better^^
I usually have a lunch at noon with my coworker.
>>I usually eat lunch with my co-workers.
we are usually the first team who reach at the canteen in our company.^ ^
>>correct
and I usually finish having lunch around 12:25.
>>I usually finish my lunch at 12:25
today our canteen’s menu was not good.ㅠ ㅠ how about you?
>>correct
Do you know my position?
>>correct
I couldn't remember if i told you about it while we met when jenny went to USA.
>>I can’t remember if I told you about it before.
I have two position.
>>I have 2 positions
the major position
>>correct
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