lunch.

2010-03-25 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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Dear lei. Did you have a lunch? I forgot to ask it during our conversation.^ ^ My lunch time is from 12 to 1pm. I usually have a lunch at noon with my coworker. we are usually the first team who reach at the cateen in our company.^ ^ and I usully finish having lunch around 12:25. today our cateen's menu was not good.ㅠ ㅠ how about you? Do you know my position? I couldn't remember if i told you about it while we met when jenny went to USA. I have two position. the major position

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Dear lei. Did you have a lunch? I forgot to ask it during our conversation.^ ^ >>Did you have lunch already? I forgot to ask you during our class.   My lunch time is from 12 to 1pm. >>correct >>My lunch break is from 12 to 1pm. - better^^   I usually have a lunch at noon with my coworker. >>I usually eat lunch with my co-workers.   we are usually the first team who reach at the canteen in our company.^ ^ >>correct   and I usually finish having lunch around 12:25. >>I usually finish my lunch at 12:25   today our canteen’s menu was not good.ㅠ ㅠ how about you? >>correct   Do you know my position? >>correct   I couldn't remember if i told you about it while we met when jenny went to USA. >>I can’t remember if I told you about it before.   I have two position. >>I have 2 positions   the major position >>correct

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