Lunch Menu

2017-11-09 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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Tommorrow is Friday.Tommorrow's lunch will be fine.The menu is spagetti and barbeque and french fries.It is really really tasty menu.On Friday,lunch menu is usually special.Because Friday is good day.Having a lunch makes me happy.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


You just made me envious about your lunch tomorrow. T_T

I hope my lunch is as good as yours. ^^

Enjoy your lunch tomorrow so that you\'ll feel happy!

See you next week!


_Teacher Dianne ^_^


Tommorrow is Friday.

>> Tomorrow is Friday. (Be careful with the spelling of \"tomorrow\")

Tommorrow\'s lunch will be fine.

>> Tomorrow\'s lunch will be fine.

The menu is spagetti and barbeque and french fries.It is really really tasty menu.

>> The menu includes spaghetti, barbeque, and french fries. It is really a tasty menu.

>> or: The menu has spaghetti, barbecue, and french fries.It is really tasty.

On Friday,lunch menu is usually special.Because Friday is good day.

>> On Fridays, the lunch menu is usually special because Friday is a good day.

Having a lunch makes me happy.

>> correct

>> or: Eating lunch makes me happy.


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