Lying
학생이 쓴 원문
Many publics including me often lie to not lose themselves or what they have.
We sometimes make strong results like reputations, relationships and assets something like that by lying.
However, the more we lie, the deeper we fall into lying cycle.
Lying makes other lying and if it will be exposed someday by specific reason, our castle that we\'ve built will collapse in a short seconds.
What I want to tell you about lying is that It is important to behave with flexibility while we\'ve watched a lot of lying by acquaintances, politicians and celebrities.
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Many publics including me often lie to not lose themselves or what they have.
>>Many people including me often lie to avoid losing themselves or what they have or value.
We sometimes make strong results like reputations, relationships and assets something like that by lying.
We sometimes make strong results like reputations, relationships and assets something like that by lying.
>>We sometimes achieve things like strong reputations, relationships, and assets by lying or through deception.
However, the more we lie, the deeper we fall into lying cycle.
However, the more we lie, the deeper we fall into lying cycle.
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>>However, the more we lie, the deeper we become entangled in a web of lies.
Lying makes other lying and if it will be exposed someday by specific reason, our castle that we\'ve built will collapse in a short seconds.
Lying makes other lying and if it will be exposed someday by specific reason, our castle that we\'ve built will collapse in a short seconds.
>>One lie makes it easier to tell another, and if our lie or deceit is exposed or revealed for a specific reason someday, all we\'ve built will collapse or crumble quickly.
What I want to tell you about lying is that It is important to behave with flexibility while we\'ve watched a lot of lying by acquaintances, politicians and celebrities.
What I want to tell you about lying is that It is important to behave with flexibility while we\'ve watched a lot of lying by acquaintances, politicians and celebrities.
>>What I want to tell you about lying is that I believe flexibility is important, especially considering the prevalence of dishonesty we see from our acquaintances, politicians and celebrities.
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