Lying doesn\'t make any value
학생이 쓴 원문
Everyone including me will be disappointed when we see someone have been untruthful about situation.
However I believe that the more we expect the more we become to be disappointed.
If I don\'t have any expectation or belief to someone, lying could not strongly affect me.
The most important thing is closeness with each other.
When I face this kind of situation, I will try to indicate lying softly and make them tell the truth with truthful emotion.
강사 첨삭
Hey there, Ms. [Name] [이름]! Your point about the inherent disappointment caused by dishonesty resonated deeply with me. While it\'s tempting to lower expectations to lessen the sting, I agree wholeheartedly that our strong relationship should supersede any temporary setbacks. Thank you for your insightful composition.
~~Jenna
Everyone including me will be disappointed when we see someone have been untruthful about situation.
>>Everyone, including me, will be disappointed when we see someone has been untruthful about a situation.
However I believe that the more we expect the more we become to be disappointed.
However I believe that the more we expect the more we become to be disappointed.
>>However, I believe that the more we expect, the more we become disappointed.
If I don\'t have any expectation or belief to someone, lying could not strongly affect me.
If I don\'t have any expectation or belief to someone, lying could not strongly affect me.
>>If I don\'t have any expectation or belief to someone, lying would not strongly affect me.
The most important thing is closeness with each other.
The most important thing is closeness with each other.
Correct, or
>>The most important thing is the closeness between my loved ones and me.
When I face this kind of situation, I will try to indicate lying softly and make them tell the truth with truthful emotion.
When I face this kind of situation, I will try to indicate lying softly and make them tell the truth with truthful emotion.
>> When I face this kind of situation, I will try to gently point out the lie, and make them tell the truth genuinely or sincerely.
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