Lynn
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름],
A cool Wednesday morning to you!
Controversies and scandals about government officials are always on the news. They should know better. After all before they were elected, they are supposed to be aware of their duties and responsibilities if ever elected. Abuse of power has always been their like you said all throughout history. I wonder if we\'d see the day when people from the government would do what they are suppose to do and live according to the rules of society. Anyway, your sentences are very good. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me through this composition. See you later!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
We talked about several slips of the tongue here in Korea.
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The minister of Education described citizens are like pigs and dogs.
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All we have to do is just let them eat.
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So horrible to know how high ranking officials consider people.
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They don\'t work for people at all.
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They just try to satisfy theirselves with their own interest looking down on normal citizens.
>>They just try to satisfy themselves with their own interest looking down on common citizens.
Of course, there has been a hierarchy throughout the whole history, even prehistory.
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People who have their own farms ruled the peasants.
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Bourgeoisie who run their own factories control their workers named Proletariat.
>>Bourgeoisie who run their own factories control their workers called Proletariat.
But these days, all the political leaders are supposed to stand up for common people.
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They vowed to dedicate everything for people as candidates.
>>They vowed to dedicate everything to the people as candidates.
We elected them providing privilege and authorities.
>>We elected them providing them privileges and authorities.
They shouldn\'t have done that.
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Any way, have a nice day, Lynn. See you tomorrow morning. Bye.
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