Machines that makes our lives easier
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Hello Ariel!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
I think smartphones and auto mobiles make our lives easier.
>> CORRECT!
Because we can do almost everything with our smartphones such as call, e-banking, shopping and etc.
>> We can do almost everything with our smartphones such as making a call, e-banking, shopping and etc.
And auto mobiles enable us to move to other places quickly and easily so it can save our time.
>> Also, auto mobiles enable us to move to other places quickly and easily, so it can help us save our time.
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