Made a friends

2018-03-29 · 첨삭 강사 Brian

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I made some friends.And I will have a good realtions with my friends.I have a little hard time making new friends in a new classmates.And I made a friends for four friends.I will keep my friends.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],
Thank You for doing your assignment
It\'s good that you are making new friends

I\'m happy for you
Good Job!



Teacher Brian,   


I made some friends.

>>Last weekend I made some new friends

And I will have a good realtions with my friends.

>>and I think that we will have a good relationship.

I have a little hard time making new friends in a new classmates.

>>actually I am having a hard time making new friends from my new classmates

And I made a friends for four friends.I will keep my friends.

>>And last weekend I made four new friends, I will keep and treasure my new friends.



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