made me feel better
학생이 쓴 원문
What have I been happy lately?
I remember a few things.
I usually check the gym once a month.
When the results come out well I feel so good.
Sometimes it is good to eat out or go hiking with my family.
If there is anything different about having a family,
Even if it`s not me, I become happy when someone in my family is happy.
I think what makes me feel good is nearby.
when I wake up early in the morning and go out exercise,
The cool wind and air on my face made me feel refreshed.
강사 첨삭
Hi Mrs. [Name] thank you for doing your homework all the time. Keep it up. Again, please enjoy your holiday. See you next week.
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>> I usually go to the gym at least once a month.
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>> If there is any different about having a family, when someone in my family is happy, I also become happy.
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>> When I wake up early in the morning, I exercise.
>> The cool wind and air on my face makes me feel refreshed.
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