Made ramen at school.

2018-05-10 · 첨삭 강사 Brian

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I made ramen at school.It was really horrible.It was not tasty at all.Beause some guys put a lot of water.So,it was so bland.But the nutrious was good.We added beaf and bean sprouts.If we didn't put a lot of water it was better.And the beaf was not good for the ramen.Sin Ramen and beaf combination is not delicious at all.I want to eat paldo bibim ramen.It tastes really good.I bet you will like it.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],

Thank you for doing your homework

See you next meeting

Keep up the good work.!





Teacher Brian,



I made ramen at school.It was really horrible.

>> I made ramen at school and it taste horrible

It was not tasty at all.Beause some guys put a lot of water.So,it was so bland.

>> It was not tasty at all because some guys put a lot of water that makes the ramen so bland

But the nutrious was good.We added beaf and bean sprouts.

>> But it is notorious we added beef and sprout beans 

If we didn\'t put a lot of water it was better.And the beaf was not good for the ramen.Sin Ramen and beaf combination is not delicious at all.

>> If we didn\'t put a lot of water it might be perfect and the beef was not good for the ramer it\'s not a good combination at all

I want to eat paldo bibim ramen.It tastes really good.I bet you will like it.

>>I want to eat paldo bibim ramen It tastes really good,I bet you will like it.



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