Made ramen at school.
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Teacher Brian,
I made ramen at school.It was really horrible.
>> I made ramen at school and it taste horrible
It was not tasty at all.Beause some guys put a lot of water.So,it was so bland.
>> It was not tasty at all because some guys put a lot of water that makes the ramen so bland
But the nutrious was good.We added beaf and bean sprouts.
>> But it is notorious we added beef and sprout beans
If we didn\'t put a lot of water it was better.And the beaf was not good for the ramen.Sin Ramen and beaf combination is not delicious at all.
>> If we didn\'t put a lot of water it might be perfect and the beef was not good for the ramer it\'s not a good combination at all
I want to eat paldo bibim ramen.It tastes really good.I bet you will like it.
>>I want to eat paldo bibim ramen It tastes really good,I bet you will like it.
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