magnet diary
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I think magnet is good rocks. because.. many use a magic and magnet perform perfect and amazing. why? stick and push. Don't you think
surprising?
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Yes, I think magnets are amazing.
When I was your age, I used to collect magnets.
Horse-shoe magnets, bar magnets, etc.
They are really great.
T. RJ
Here are your corrections:
I think magnet is good rocks.
>>I think the magnet is a good rock.
because.. many use a magic and magnet perform perfect and amazing.
>>because it is used for magic and it performs perfectly and amazingly.
why? stick and push.
>>Why? Because its sticks and pushes.
Don't you think surprising?
>> Don뭪 you think it뭩 surprising?
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