magnet diary

2010-02-19 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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I think magnet is good rocks. because.. many use a magic and magnet perform perfect and amazing. why? stick and push. Don't you think surprising?

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름], Yes, I think magnets are amazing. When I was your age, I used to collect magnets. Horse-shoe magnets, bar magnets, etc. They are really great. T. RJ Here are your corrections: I think magnet is good rocks. >>I think the magnet is a good rock. because.. many use a magic and magnet perform perfect and amazing. >>because it is used for magic and it performs perfectly and amazingly. why? stick and push. >>Why? Because its sticks and pushes. Don't you think surprising? >> Don뭪 you think it뭩 surprising?

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