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2010-11-26 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Dear [Name]. [Name]. Sorry for late reply. I need time to check exact now status. My sales checked with End user. They use this part continuously. They guess it will need this Dec or 2011.Jan. I understand what you want to say, but we didn’t meet promise with customer for delivery. Therefore, we can not push they must keep their all ordered q’ty. We already advised to customer we have 6Kpcs as STK. Sales say to customer every day. Even I understand your status, this is our best. We will try to sell your stock on our best.

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Hello!              Oh, wow, business talk! I assume that this is a letter to a customer who has high demands. It's really amazing how large businesses survive for it takes so much work and dedication to keep it going.              I hope that you have a good night rest and a fruitful and happy week!  Take care. Jane Dear [Name]. [Name].>> Dear [Name]. [Name],Sorry for late reply. >> Sorry for the late reply.I need time to check exact now status.>> I need time to check my current status.My sales checked with End user.  >> My sales were checked with End user?They use this part continuously. >> CorrectThey guess it will need this Dec or 2011.Jan.>> I guess it will be needed this December or this/by January 2010.I understand what you want to say, but we didn't meet promise with customer for delivery. >> I understand what you want to say, but we didn't meet the demand of the customer for delivery. Therefore, we can not push they must keep their all ordered q’ty. >> Therefore, we can not push. They must keep all the ordered quantity. We already advised to customer we have 6Kpcs as STK. >> We already advised the customer that we have 6,000 pieces on stock. >> We already advised the customer that we have a stock of 6,000 pieces. Sales say to customer every day.  >> Sales personnel tells that to the customer every day.  Even I understand your status, this is our best. >> Even I understand your status but this is our best. >> I, myself understand your status but this is our best. We will try to sell your stock on our best. >> We will try our best to sell your stocks.

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