Major league baseball
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This year major league baseball team's champion was Boston Resdsox. On Worldseries Boston Redsox had a match with LA Dogers. There was a Korean pitcher,Rhy hyeon jin in LA Dogers. In worldseries some team who win 4times in 7games are champion. And Boston Redsox win 4times early.There is an American League and National league in MLB. And in American league Boston redsox won in East league and clevland won in Central league ans Houston won West league and Newyork yankess and oakland went to wildcard. And in National league atlanta won in East league and milwaukee won in Central league.And LA Dogers won in West league and coloardo and chicago cubs went wildcard. In wild card newyork yankess and coloardo won and they go to divison series. In disvison seires there was a game with clevland with Houston and newyork yankess with boston in American league. And atlanta with LA and colorado with milwaukee. And houston and boston won and LA and milwaukee won. And they had match on champion seris.
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Hi, [이름]!
Thank you very much for sharing a lot of things about the American League for this year.
Thank you very much for sharing a lot of things about the American League for this year.
Baseball seems to be a very interesting sport.
Would you like to become a baseball player someday?
Anyhow, I hope you\'re doing great.
See you again in our next class.
Take care always. :)
~Teacher Charry ^^
Would you like to become a baseball player someday?
Anyhow, I hope you\'re doing great.
See you again in our next class.
Take care always. :)
~Teacher Charry ^^
>> This year, the Major League Baseball Teams\' champion is Boston Red Sox.
On Worldseries Boston Redsox had a match with LA Dogers.
>> In the World Series, Boston Red Sox had a match with LA Dodgers.
There was a Korean pitcher,Rhy hyeon jin in LA Dogers.
>> There is a Korean pitcher in LA Dodgers and his name is Rhy Hyeon Jin .
In worldseries some team who win 4times in 7games are champion.
>> In the World Series the team who wins four times out of seven games is considered the champion.
And Boston Redsox win 4times early.
>> Boston Red Sox has won four times already.
There is an American League and National league in MLB.
>> CORRECT!
And in American league Boston redsox won in East league and clevland won in Central league ans Houston won West league and Newyork yankess and oakland went to wildcard.
>> In the American League, Boston Red Sox from the East League won. Cleveland on the other hand won in the Central League and Houston won the West League. New York Yankees and Oakland went to the wildcard.
And in National league atlanta won in East league and milwaukee won in Central league.
>> In the National League, Atlanta won in the East League and Milwaukee won in the Central League.
And LA Dogers won in West league and coloardo and chicago cubs went wildcard.
>> The LA Dodgers won in the West League while Colorado and Chicago Cubs went to the wildcard.
In wild card newyork yankess and coloardo won and they go to divison series.
>> In the wild card, New York Yankess and Coloardo won and they both went to the divison series.
In disvison seires there was a game with clevland with Houston and newyork yankess with boston in American league.
>> In the division series, there was a game between Cleveland and Houston; and between New York Yankess and Boston in the American League.
And atlanta with LA and colorado with milwaukee.
>> There was a match between Atlanta and LA; and between Colorado and Milwaukee.
And houston and boston won and LA and milwaukee won.
>> Houston, Boston, LA and Milwaukee won.
And they had match on champion seris.
>> They went against one another in a match for the champion series.
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