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These days I am interested in Major League.And I chose my team recently.
>> These days, I\'m interested in Major League and I chose my team recently .
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>> These days, I\'m interested in Major League and I recently chose my favorite team.
I like Milwaukee Brewers.
>> Correct
The logo with the team is nice and the results of the team is not bad.
>> The logo of the team is nice and the results of the team is not bad.
But in Korean many people love LA Dogers or New York Yankees or Texas.
>> But in Korea, many people love LA Dodgers or New York Yankees or Texas Rangers.
In LA Dogers there is a Korean pitcher Ryu Hyeon-Gin.And New York Yankees has a long history and they are good team.
>> In LA Dodgers, there is a Korean pitcher named Ryu Hyeon Gin. New York Yankees has a long history and they are a good team.
In this season Boston Redsox is the most hot team.
>> In this season, Boston Redsox is the hottest team.
My mom likes Clevland Indians and LA Dogers.
>> My mom likes Cleveland Indians and LA Dodgers.
In Major League there is a lot of team.In Korea there is just 10 teams.
>> In the Major League, there are a lot of team but in Korea, there are just 10 teams.
But In Major League there is over 50 teams.And because of that there is two league in major league.
>> But in the Major League there are over 50 teams and because if that, there are two leagues.
It is national league and american league.
>> There is the National league and the American league.
And national league has western team southern team eastern team and american team has western team southern team and eastern team.
>> The National League has Western, Southern and the eastern Teams. The American League has Western, Southern and Eastern Teams.
Most of the team is in America but Toronto Blue Jays is in Canada.On October Post Season will held.
>> Most of the teams are in America but Toronto Blue Jays is in Canada. On October, the post season will be held.
I hope Milwaukee Brewers win the league go to world series and win the champion.
>> I hope Milwaukee Brewers will win the league and go to world series and win the championship.
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