Make a friend
학생이 쓴 원문
I spend most time of day alone in the laboratory. It\'s actually not so hard for me because I\'m not a sociable person. I enjoy meeting with friends only who have a friendship with me. I feel that the more I got an age, the more difficult to make friends casually. The opportunity of meeting people is limited in a workspace or like official places. That\'s why it is difficult to make a near friend as getting older.
강사 첨삭
Hi John!
Let\'s focus on clarity in your sentences.
Please review the correct terms that I used below.
They are the ones commonly used for these situations.
Familiarize yourself with them and I can\'t wait for you to use them again.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I spend most time of day alone in the laboratory.
>> I spend most time of the day alone in the laboratory.
It\'s actually not so hard for me because I\'m not a sociable person.
>> Correct
I enjoy meeting with friends only who have a friendship with me.
>> I enjoy hanging out only with close friends.
I feel that the more I got an age, the more difficult to make friends casually.
>> I feel that the more I get older, the more difficult it is to maintain casual friendships.
The opportunity of meeting people is limited in a workspace or like official places.
>> Opportunities for meeting people are limited in the workplace or business places.
That\'s why it is difficult to make a near friend as getting older.
>> That\'s why it is difficult to develop close friendships as we get older.
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