make a mistake while have a conversation.

2010-02-24 · 첨삭 강사 Jennifer

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Dear [Name]~ Am I so snapish? Yes. maybe I am. during a conversation, I made many mistakes. and also I couldn't experess the situation with correct word. because I havn't learned many expression. and also I clumsy with grammar constrution. Actually I studied English above 3 hours in a day. also I listened English novel on my way to work and home. in addition, I read a English novel in my bed. but i always make mistakes. I couldn't remember the expression during conversation. but after I remember it and I regreted that why i didn't use the expression? making compositon is easy than speaking to express my correct idea. but i didn't disappoint about my mistakes. I sure that sometimes i will speak fluently without a hesitate.

강사 첨삭

[이름], I think it’s pretty normal in the beginning. One has to really immerse herself in English and try to have as much conversation as possible to be able to master the art of English conversation. Though you tend to learn and memorize a lot of expressions, you still have to get used to applying them during your English encounters such as our class. Take it a little step at a time. I believe you can do it! ^^ Jenny Here are the corrections: Am I so snappish? >>Correct.  Yes. maybe I am. >> Yes, maybe I am.  during a conversation, I made many mistakes. and also I couldn't experess the situation with correct word. because I havn't learned many expression. >> During conversations, I make many mistakes and I also feel that I couldn’t my ideas clearly using correct and appropriate words because I have not learnt many expressions.  and also I clumsy with grammar constrution. >>I am also clumsy with my grammar construction. Actually I studied English above 3 hours in a day. >> Actually, I study English for more than 3 hours everyday. also I listened English novel on my way to work and home. >>I also listen to an English novel on Audio on my way to work, and when I’m on my way home.  in addition, I read a English novel in my bed. >>In addition, I try to read English novels before I go to bed, But I always make mistakes. I couldn't remember the expression during conversation. >>Still, I always make mistakes and couldn’t recall expressions I’ve learnt during the actual conversation. but after I remember it and I regreted that why i didn't use the expression? >> Shortly after, I have regrets as soon as I remember the right expression I should have used.  making compositon is easy than speaking to express my correct idea. but i didn't disappoint about my mistakes. >> Writing about my ideas is a lot easier than speaking it, but, I am not disappointed about making mistakes.  I sure that sometimes i will speak fluently without a hesitate. >> I am sure that I will be able to speak fluently without any hesitations one day.    

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