make a sentance using the words

2011-06-16 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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today, i learned about 3 words from the teacher. so i want to make a sentance using the new words. 1. alleviate (v) After taking a medicine, my pain is alleviated quickly. 2. inhale (v) sometimes i inhale smoke from other people regardless of my intention. 3. asthma (n) Those who have a asthma do not smoke at all times in oder to keep their health.

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Hello [이름]! First composition, thanks for dropping it in! Good job! Okay, please don뭪 forget to capitalize the beginning of your sentences, alright? And you can combine your sentences together by using a coma like the one in the first sentence. :D I뭠l see you [이름]orrow! :D -T. Dominic today, i learned about 3 words from the teacher.>>CORRECT >>I learned 3 words from the teacher today, so I want to make sentences using these words. so i want to make a sentance using the new words.1. alleviate (v)After taking a medicine, my pain is alleviated quickly.>>After taking medicine, my pain was alleviated quickly. [please check on the tense of verbs, After and Was] >>SAMPLE SENTENCE: A car pool alleviates some of the stress of driving the kids to and from school every day. 2. inhale (v)sometimes i inhale smoke from other people regardless of my intention.>>Sometimes I inhale smoke from other people regardless of my location. [what do you mean by intention?] 3. asthma (n)Those who have a asthma do not smoke at all times in oder to keep their health. >>Those who have asthma do not smoke at all to keep themselves healthy.

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