make a sentance using the words
학생이 쓴 원문
today, i learned about 3 words from the teacher.
so i want to make a sentance using the new words.
1. alleviate (v)
After taking a medicine, my pain is alleviated quickly.
2. inhale (v)
sometimes i inhale smoke from other people regardless of my intention.
3. asthma (n)
Those who have a asthma do not smoke at all times in oder to keep their health.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
First composition, thanks for dropping it in! Good job! Okay, please don뭪 forget to capitalize the beginning of your sentences, alright? And you can combine your sentences together by using a coma like the one in the first sentence. :D
I뭠l see you [이름]orrow! :D
-T. Dominic
today, i learned about 3 words from the teacher.>>CORRECT
>>I learned 3 words from the teacher today, so I want to make sentences using these words. so i want to make a sentance using the new words.1. alleviate (v)After taking a medicine, my pain is alleviated quickly.>>After taking medicine, my pain was alleviated quickly. [please check on the tense of verbs, After and Was]
>>SAMPLE SENTENCE: A car pool alleviates some of the stress of driving the kids to and from school every day. 2. inhale (v)sometimes i inhale smoke from other people regardless of my intention.>>Sometimes I inhale smoke from other people regardless of my location. [what do you mean by intention?]
3. asthma (n)Those who have a asthma do not smoke at all times in oder to keep their health.
>>Those who have asthma do not smoke at all to keep themselves healthy.
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