Make a sentence!

2012-08-16 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Vinegar is so sour! So I don't like it. 2. My mom's necklace is pretty.But I can't take it. 3. She asks her brother take a shower. 4. I look away to the pet store.They are very cute! 5. Scientist always experiment.But I wish they wouldn't experiment with experimental animal. 6. We take turns cooking every day. 7. I am dissatisfied with play the piano at night. 8. I focus on her presentation.It is excellent! 9. She fits her size of shoes. 10.Our team's total score is 21! So we are win!

강사 첨삭

Good morning!! I really do appreciate your effort every time you do your homework.  Thank you so much!! See you ^^ ~~T.Meg~~ 1. Vinegar is so sour! So I don\'t like it. >>CORRECT!2. My mom\'s necklace is pretty.But I can\'t take it. >>CORRECT! >>My mom\'s necklace is pretty. But I can\'t borrow it.3. She asks her brother take a shower. >>She asked her brother to take a shower. 4. I look away to the pet store.They are very cute! >>I looked around the pet store. They are very cute!5. Scientist always experiment.But I wish they wouldn\'t experiment with experimental animal. >>CORRECT!6. We take turns cooking every day. >>CORRECT!7. I am dissatisfied with play the piano at night. >>I am dissatisfied playing the piano at night. 8. I focus on her presentation.It is excellent! >>I focussed on her presentation. It was excellent! 9. She fits her size of shoes. >>She fits in this size of shoes.10.Our team\'s total score is 21! So we are win! >>Our team\'s total score is 21! So we won!

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