Make a sentence using the given word.
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to be a person who is more desperate for what I want.
Drugs and guns are forbid in korea.
If dusk means sunset, I was comforted by the dusk when I was in high school.
I think I\\\'m a negative person, so I\\\'m amazed and envious of people who think affirmatively every moment.
강사 첨삭
Hi Sandy!
Don\'t be jealous. It\'s just means they conquered a difficult challenge that\'s why they are positive.
And you will soon be, so you just need to conquer every challenge that comes.
Fighting!
I want to be a person who is more desperate for what I want.
>>> I want to be a person who desperately wants everything.
Drugs and guns are forbid in korea.
>>> Drugs and guns are forbidden in Korea.
If dusk means sunset, I was comforted by the dusk when I was in high school.
>>> CORRECT!
I think I\\\'m a negative person, so I\\\'m amazed and envious of people who think affirmatively every moment.
>>> I think I\'m a negative person, so I\'m amazed and jealous of people who think positively every moment.
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