Make a sentence using the words below: 1. check the news 2. win/won the election 3. furious 4. defea
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A day ago, I was checking the news. And I saw that Joe Biden won the election! Joe Biden looks very happy but Trump was very furious about the result because he was defeated. Also I saw about many countries feeling happy at the end of Trump. Trump did scary management like trade wars.
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A day ago, I was checking the news. And I saw that Joe Biden won the election!
>> or: I was checking the news yesterday when I saw that Joe Biden won the election.
Joe Biden looks very happy but Trump was very furious about the result because he was defeated.
>> He looked very happy but Trump seemed very furious about the result because he was defeated.
Also I saw about many countries feeling happy at the end of Trump.
>> Also, I read that many countries feel happy about the end of the Trump administration.
Trump did scary management like trade wars.
>> Trump engaged in trade wars during his term.
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