Make a sentence using the words below: 1. politicians 2. politics 3. economy 4. different opinions 5
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Nowadays, many politicians fight about the politics. While they argue about the economy, they fight Because they have different opinions. I think it\'s bad fighting between the politicians.
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Nowadays, many politicians fight about the politics.
>> correct
>> or: It\'s quite common for many politicians to have arguments or conflicts these days.
While they argue about the economy, they fight Because they have different opinions.
>> While they argue about the economy, they fight because they have different opinions.
I think it\'s bad fighting between the politicians.
>> I think fighting between politicians is really bad.
>> or: I believe that fighting between politicians sets a bad example, especially for the youth.
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