Make a sentence using the words below: 1. restful weekend 2. high-energy workout 3. entertaining 4.
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Dance aerobic can fill well your restful weekend. It is high-energy workout, so you can adjust your weight. I prefer the style of aerobic than other sports because it is entertaining. So I think that you will enjoy the aerobic for the rest of the day.
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Here\'s your edited composition, [이름]! See you in our next class!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Dance aerobic can fill well your restful weekend.
>>You would have a restful weekend if you did dance aerobics.
It is high-energy workout, so you can adjust your weight.
>> It is a high-energy workout so you can lose weight.
I prefer the style of aerobic than other sports because it is entertaining.
>> I prefer aerobics to other sports because it\'s more entertaining.
So I think that you will enjoy the aerobic for the rest of the day.
>> So I think that you will enjoy aerobics for the rest of the day.
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